Wednesday, 4 November 2009

Section 1: Background to the Thriller genre

Theoretical approaches to the thriller genre

GK Chesterton - The Transformed City
The British author Chesterton wrote a series of crime detective stories in the early 1900's. As a modern genre, he liked the idea of the 'poetry of modern life'. In doing this, he protected the thriller genre fiercely from critics by describing reality as drab and mundane, and a thriller is an attempt to find possibilities for excitement and adventure within the boring world of reality.

Northrop Frye - The Heroic Romance
Frye agrees with Chesterton's take on the genre, and pioneered the theory that the hero could be 'one of us' . We, as the audience agree with these strange circumstances as we do with the romance genre - as in romance ordinary laws of nature are slightly suspended and completely skewed. This ends up as the the thriller exchanging the romantic setting of the 'enchanted forest' for a more urbanized setting in the 'modern city'

John Cawelti - The Exotic
Cawelti agrees with Frye and Chesterton, and thinks that the setting transforms the city 'from a modern centre of commerce, industry and science into a place of enchantment and mystery'. The exotic doesn't necessarily mean as in a tropical island; it is simply something other to the audience or foreign to the viewer. Many thrillers use artefacts from the middle east or the orient e.g Japanese style props in Blade Runner or the african artefacts in Jumanji.

WH Matthews - Mazes and Labyrinths
This theme comes from Greek Mythology, related to Theseus and the Minotaur. The hero has to overcome a variety of challenges through a maze of twists to defeat the villain. It is a definitive formula for a lot of thrillers. Labyrinths and mazes show the twists and turns in which a story goes. The journey of the story is a theoretical maze. For example, in the Da Vinci Code it is a system by system story in which deduction and strategy works along with the hero to puzzle through, and involves the audience - will they find the answer before the hero does?

Pascal Bonitzer - Partial Vision
Bonitzer argues that we, as an audience, can only see so much, and what we cannot see is as, if not more important than what we can see. As if there is a hidden truth within the movie, that could be the 'last piece of the puzzle'. 'The answers may lie just around the next turn in the labyrinth'.

Lars Ole Saurberg - Concealment and Protraction
Concealment is the deliberate hiding of something from the audience. This links to Bonitzer's idea of 'partial vision'. It could be the hiding of an identity or a vital clue to the mystery of the film. Protraction is the intentional delaying of a suspected outcome e.g Bomb Countdowns. This encourages dramatic irony - the character doesn't know what is coming next, but the viewer does.

Noel Carroll - The Question-Answer Model
The audience wait for the answers to the questions that thrillers bring up - suspense is brought to the answers. The questions simply develops the thoughts of the audience - what? where? who why? The probability factor plays a part in the thriller genre - if something is more likely to happen, it is less exciting and suspenseful than something that is half chance, or almost impossible. The moral factor is important within thrillers - if we consider the outcome to be morally right we feel more secure with the story and it sharpens the suspense. This is evident in films such as the Bourne Supremacy - we want Bourne to get his true identity back; even though he is not living by the conventional ideas of right and wrong, he is right within the character profile.

Section 2: Research into examples of thriller opening scenes

Se7en

Setting
The film is set in a nondescript area; we don't see much of the actual location because of the extreme close ups on the action. The whole scene is dark, which creates tension - is there something there that we as the audience cannot see? Basic colours are used - red, white and black, possibly contrasting with themes of blood, purity and evil. A lot of the scene is lighted with a green tinge - connoting mystery, envy and jealousy.

Props
In the opening scene of Se7en, lots of props are used. Huge dirty books on the side - studying old forms of knowledge, not up to date. Razor blades and scalpels connote with the fragility of the body, and suggest mutilation and pain.
American money is used in the sequence - perhaps to give clues as to where the film is set. 'In God We Trust'
Eyes on pictures are blanked out to make them anonymous - cold, calculated murder.

Sound
A metronome in the background signifys the counting of time... and possibly the wasting of it.
The music is repetitive. High pitched 'screaming' style sound effects are used throughout the opening to bring tension to the atnosphere.

Characters
Somerset - Morgan Freeman. He is a rational character, and is very thoughtful and wise. He always thinks before he acts.
Mills - Brad Pitt. He is a reasonless character - he acts very much the opposite of 'by the book'. He is young, almost the 'maverick' of the police.
These characters conflict in a lot of ways. They seem to have an opposition in almost every area; age, race, dress sense, relationship status...
This creates tension for the audience, as they want to watch on to see how the conflicting characters react when they have to cooperate as a team.

Narrative
Calm and calculated opening. It becomes apparent that there is something sinister going on throughout the scene, but it is carefully organised; smart.



Titles/Graphics
Sketchy scribbling writing is used to signify crazy and psychotic people.
Monochrome -> opposites. E.G Good and Evil, Race, Status, Age... Red - Blood, death, murder
Flashing images are used so they stick in the audience's mind. This is used along with ghosting in order to speed up the sequences, and catch the audience's attention.



Se7en is a successful thriller because it combines a variety of codes and conventions of thriller films in an effective manner, but also manages to defy the audience's preconceptions by using mystery and deceit. This is done by creating tension through the setting, colour and sound used in the opening. Extreme close ups are used to great effect - the audience cannot see everything that is going on and although we are watching as a 'fly on the wall', mystery is added by not being able to have a complete overview of the scene.



Red Eye

Narrative Structure
The first character shown in the film is in a photograph of an attractive woman, shown in her graduation robes. This tells the audience that she is clever, without literally saying it. It also suggests that she is going to be a main character in the film.
The story is told through a few different strands of the plot; one following a crate, another following a wallet.

Thriller codes and conventions used in Red Eye
Fast paced music.
Extreme close ups.
Hidden sense of mystery and 'enigma' -> secret, puzzle and riddle.
Aggressive.
Initials - vague.

Cinematography
Most of the faces remain anonymous; only main characters' features are shown.
A lot of extreme close ups are used- they show detail and eliminate the need to tell the audience about the setting.
Point of view shots and over the shoulder shots give the audience the feel of eavesdropping on an important conversation, and encourages them to feel more involved.
Tracking shots are used a lot in the scene in order to 'slink in' to the object of interest.
The scene ends with a low angle establishing shot of the hotel; the hotel is an important point of authority in the movie.

Mise-En-Scene
The darkness of the scene (shot at night time) creates tension.
The first setting was a house, which then switched to an industrial estate, then to a hotel. The industrial estate contrasts greatly with the comfort of the other two settings; the evil begins there? Dark and Light create contrast;



Photos of hotels and blueprints in the hotel room contrast with photos of family in the house - more of a 'good guy' location.
The wallet that was stolen only had initials on - adds anonymity. The money and credit cards are unimportant and unwanted. The wallet was also in the centre of the screen, which shows that it is the main focus of the shot. When the money is thrown out, a picture of the girl shown in the first shot is left in the wallet - This shows she is also important in the movie.
The mystery of what is in the crate intrigues the viewer - the fish in the crate are unimportant.


Sound
Tense, orchestral music is used to create more excitement. The music is fast, but low pitched, and builds up to crescendos when the location changes. It is used along with sound fx of planes, which gives the audience a clue as to what is coming in the film. The sound reflects the action throughout the scene; diagetic house sounds are used, such as creaky doors, which seem loud in the silent house. The sound builds up towards the end of the scene, and fits in with the diegetic sounds in beats of two - when the man bangs on the van door twice, it is as if he is sending the van and the music away.

Editing
Crosscutting is used to show a variety of shots quickly, and disolves are used to change the location of the action. The sequence slows down, and speeds up again, to create excitement and an element of chaos for the audience. The final sequence is the fastest and encourages the audience to watch on, and adds intrigue to the story.

Graphics
The nondescript titles are black and white, possibly to show the contrast of good and evil.The titles move away into the distance as if we are travelling away from them. Red Eye is the last main title to be shown, and is coloured in a bold red, to convey the idea of blood and murder. The simplicity of the titles shows that they are not important in the story; some titles are also shown over the top of the action.

State of Play

Narrative Structure
Political thriller, with a clear beginning, middle and end -> shows equilibrium. A chase scene means the film starts with action almost immediately, but adds drama and encourages the audience to watch on.

Thriller Codes and Conventions used in State of Play
Typical chase scene involving a gun. However, the chaser remains unseen until the last few seconds of the scene.
Dark night - adds tension.

Cinematography
The camerawork in this scene changes as the scene goes along.

POV shots, steadicams and handheld cameras are used to follow the man we are chasing. This means that the shots are more jerky, but more authentic within the story. Shots of architecture are used throughout the sequence. It shows us the contrast of rich and poor through the city. The last shot of the scene shows us that the innocent man on the bike passing the murder is still alive. This gives the audience hope and intrigue.

Mise-En-Scene


The weather sets the scene - a dark, cold, rainy night. The establishing shot of the scene is of the city of Washington; a city known for being linked with politics, which gives the audience a clue on the theme. Props include a briefcase... probes the audience to ask 'What's in there?!' When the man we are chasing runs onto the 'evil' side of the city down the alley, it truly shoes how frantic he is. Through the rich side of the city he had broken all signs of fragility - he pushed over the vulnerable old people, and broke china in the china shop (ironically linking to the phrase 'bull in a china shop'.)

Sound
The music at the beginning is similar to the sound effect to that of thunder, or a helicopter. This makes the audience think about what is to come. The music builds up to a crescendo and then combines with diegetic sound to Sound effects such as gun shots are used, to make the action look more real, and create more excitement and emotion.

Editing
Match on action is used throughout the scene; we, as an audience follow the main port of action, so we don't miss a thing. Because of the mystery surrounding the gunman assassin, crosscutting is not used; the assassin is kept as anonymous as possible until the last moment. The editing speeds up until the end of the chase - just like the man's breathing. Editing by the end is very fast-paced and chaotic, with shots changing every one to two seconds.

Graphics
Logos and company names are shown first in the movie. Then all titles are shown over the action, using the same font, but different colours. The colours used are red, white and blue; like the US flag. This shows that the film is related to american politics and involves some patriotic characters.

Strangers on a Train

Narrative Structure
The story of this film's opening is simple; two strangers meet on a train. After speaking for a while, Bruno suggests the idea of a double 'opposite' murder. By the end of the sequence, Bruno takes it seriously, but Guy tries to get away.
Guy-> Famous tennis player
Bruno -> Fan of Guy, seemingly obsessed with the idea of murder.
The nature of this film's plot suggests that 'everything happens for a reason'. It links to the ideas of fate and destiny within the film, as if each action has a domino effect.

Thriller codes and conventions in Strangers on a Train
Unidentified characters create mystery within the first sequence of the film; the idea of anonymity features heavily in films of the thriller genre.

Camerawork
Low level opening shot means identitys are hidden, as no faces are revealed.
Two shots are used a lot to show equality between the characters, as if they start on an 'even playing field'.
Shot reverse shot is used along with the 180 Degree rule to show the conversation between the characters.

Mise-En-Scene
The first shot of the scene shows a taxi; a taxi being the most anonymous way to travel, encouraging the audience to be intrigued by the passenger.
Contrast of the characters is seen as soon as they are first shown; the simple differences in shoes show their characters. The way in which the characters are walking also suggests they will meet soon.
There are a lot of strangers in the opening scene - it shows how crowds work, and how strangers have to cooperate with each other every day.
Train tracks are shows as a metaphor for life and life's journey. The tracks also symbolise that there are many paths to take, and it is impossible to go back; just like when a decision is made in life, they can't be taken back. The tracks crisscross together; a reference to later on in the film.
When Guy kicks Bruno, it is obviously an accident. But this one accident kickstarted a whole chain of events. This also links to the idea of train tracks and the theory of destiny.

Sound
Orchestral , old fashioned, loud music is used throughout the title sequence and beginning shots. However, compared to some thriller music, it did not connotate with things such as violence and fear. Instead, it suggested emotional and extravagant things were to come - an epic piece of music.
When we first see the shoes of Bruno, the music changes to a more 'cartoony' 'Tom and Jerry' style piece.The music in this scene defies the genre by using playful and almost innocent music to contrast with the sinister movements of the future villains.
However, this changes back to typical thriller music when Bruno enters the carriage, and the sounds change yet again; but this time to more ominous, creepy music. This gives the audience a clue of what is yet to come.
The sound throughout is in sync with the characters - in their footsteps, movement and even in the meeting. It is as if the two strands of music for each character met in the middle to show the collision of characters.


The speech from Bruno seems to be vague and sinister; 'I do admire people who do things...'. This gives us a clue that he could be a future villain.

Editing
During the beginning sequence, crosscutting was used between the two characters in order to show that they are, or will be linked in some way in the movie. It shows that they are 'destined' to meet, and are, in a way, walking towards disaster.
When the characters met, shot reverse shots were used between the two characters to symbolise their speech and show their conversation.

Graphics
Black and white bold typography was used for the majority of the title credits. This was used along with a calligraphy style font (similar to a signature?). The contrast between the two titles could symbolise the contrast between good and evil, or rich and poor.


Strangers on a plane is a successful thriller because it uses a combination of effective techniques, using sound, cinematography and the codes and conventions of the thriller genre in order t reach the audience and interest them in the film. The mystery element of the film also means that the movie has a certain 'Unique Selling Point' or USP, which keeps the audience wanting more and more answers to their fast building questions.


Hannibal Rising

Narrative Structure
A family is being evacuated from their home in WWII Germany as Nazi soldiers are taking over. Their property is now Nazi property.

Thriller Codes and Conventions
As this film is a war film is already gives the audience a sense of suspense - are we going to get another side of the story. It makes the audience feel like they have gained exclusive access.

Camerawork
Tracking shot and closeups of nature are used to bring tension to the scene, yet connotate with calm. Crane shots are also used a lot to give a general overview of the whole scene, which contrast with the closeups used - these allow the audience to view objects of importance in more detail. Most of the shots of people are viewed from a high angle perspective, showing that they are vulnerable in the scene. Low angle shots are used when tanks or planes are in shot- the war is more important than the people in it.

Mise-en-Scene
The first shot is of a spiderweb in the wind - shows the fragility and evils of human life. Various shots of nature are used to follow this, along with a wildlife shot of a wild boar. This could be suggesting that the boar is an ancient source of food, which links to the later plot of the movie.
The scene then shows children playing and laughing. This is a symbol of innocence and shows natural happiness. This is followed by shots showing us the various buildings in the area; the old church and Lecter Castle- The title character's home. Carriages are also used within the sequence to show us this was set in an earlier time- more classic. The beauty of these shots are then contrasted with bombs, tanks, amy caps and swastikas, coupled with noisy war planes overhead - the villains are taking over. A swastika is placed on the castle, showing the scene is set in WWII.



Sound
High pitched orchestral opening music contrasts with nature diegetic sound to combine to show an underlying sad theme behind the childrens' laughter. An interesting thing in the scene is that there is no opening speech between the children, only laughter and the tweeting of birds in the background. This again connotes natural happiness.

Editing
Cuts in the opening scene are sharp and quick. They speed up as the scene goes on, and by the time the family are being evacuated from their home, cuts are every 2 seconds on average.

Graphics
Graphics within the film are very plain and simple- a logo is shown before the picture is shown. Other than that, actors names are not shown - only the name of the film 'Hannibal Rising' is shown in thin bronze lettering first. It shows how important the film name is to set the tone. Words are also put on screen to show the setting of the castle - 'Lecter Castle', showing that it is owned by the Lecter family.

Hard Candy

Narrative Structure
An instant messenger conversation is going on between two people over the internet. They then meet up in 'Nighthawks' cafe.

Thriller Codes and Conventions
Black, red and white themes.
Breaks of silence within the film.

Camerawork
The opening scene of Hard Candy features a lot of graphics, which feature mainly long shots and full shots. Throughout the instant messenger conversation, cinematography included shots such as tracking shots from up to down the screen. The trackings were slow, possibly to show more detail within the words. Close to the end of the conversation, over the shoulder style shots are used - perhaps to make the audience feel as if they are spying or eavesdropping on someone else's conversation. Within the cafe, a variety of extreme close ups are used - again, to show detail, and encourage the audience to gte more acquainted with the characters.

Mise-en-scene
The instant messanging conversation is very oppositional - colours are red vs blue (we see the connotation between red for girl and blue for boy). The avatars are also synonymous with the characters - the girl has a heart logo, and the man a camera logo, which is linked to his screenname, 'Lensman319'.
The girl's character is portrayed with short hair and no makeup wearing a red hoody - adolescence. Her first close up shows her as innocent and barefaced, which shows her innocence.
The man is much older than the girl. Conventionally tall and handsome with glasses and a suit and stubble on his face.
The contrast in characters is shocking, and immediately starts alarm bells ringing for the audience - paedophilia is suspected, but the girl seems more forthcoming than the man, even shown in her screenname Thongrrrl14.

Sound
Sad, highpitched piano based music is used in the background of the graphics. It connotes a false sense of security and the repetitive tone lulls the reader into a sad mood. When on the IM window, the only sound is the diegetic typing in the background, again, as if we are eavesdropping on the conversation.



Editing
Hard Candy uses a lot of cutting to different angles - as if the audience are constantly moving and spying on the characters.

Graphics
White backgrounds and black lines use a lot of contemporary conventions. We are gollwing a red square/box as if it is on a conveyor belt. Titles are shown before the film begins - they are not laid over the action, perhaps so as not to distract the viewer from the detail. Titles are swooping in from the sides in thin, almost fragile text.

Section 3: Brainstorm of ideas for your film




Section 4: Audience Research - and research into BBFC film classification system

We asked 40 people this questionnaire, related to our film. We asked students around Priestley College, as they would ultimately be our target audience.

Our Questionnaire:





The following questions are our ideas of scenarios that may happen in our thriller, we would appreciate it if you could circle either yes or no if you think it’s a good idea.

1. What gender are you?
Male
Female


1) We asked slightly more males than females in the questionnaire, as our sample of college students contained more males.


2. Which category does your age fall in?
15-18
19-21
22-25
26+


2) The biggest age bracket was 15-18, because we asked college students. We did ask a few older students and teachers, which accounted for the rest of the age brackets.


3. What type of thriller do you prefer
Action thriller
Psychological thriller
Disaster thriller
Crime thriller



3) The most popular type of thriller film was an action thriller. The runners-up were physicological and crime thrillers, which is more accurate for our film. However, our film does contain some action, as we knew that is what our audience preferred.


4. Are weapons necessary in a thriller film
Yes
No


4) There was a joint vote for weapons in our questionnaire, as both answers got the same amount of votes. We then decided to use some weapons, but no graphic use, and none that are going to be disturbing for the viewer.


5. Do you prefer to see a male or female protagonist?
Male
Female


5) By a close vote, the audience preferred a female protaganist. However, we decided to use a female main character instead, and use male protaganists. We feel that this will still satisfy the audience.


6. Do you prefer to find out for yourself who the killer is or find out for yourself
Told who they are
Find out myself


6) The audience would rather find out for themselves who the killer is. As our film is a psychological thriller, there is a lot of times where the audience needs to figure out what is happening for themselves, which they should enjoy according to the questionnaire results.


7. How many people do you think should be killed in a good thriller?
1-3
4-5
6-7
8+



7) The audience thought that 4-5 people should be killed in a good thriller. In our film, we do not get told specifically that there has been killings in the past, and they are not shown on screen, but there are hints from two characters, that there may have been killings in the past.


8. Where do you think the best thrillers are set?
Woods
Hotels
Libraries
Abandoned houses
Warehouses


8) The most popular setting for a thriller by a far, was a hotel, which was the setting for our film in the end. We feel this is a popular choice as it is a relatively unusual setting, and hotels are supposed to be seen as 'safe places', which keeps the audience even more intrigued as to what is going to happen.


9. Which of these thrillers do you think are good?
Silence of the lambs
Se7en
The shining
The godfather
Memento


9) Silence of the Lambs was the winner for this question, which is a different genre to our film, but does have some similarities, as the plot contains some psychological theories, and contains an unidentified person creating danger, which is the same in Suite 16.


The following questions are our ideas of scenarios that may happen in our thriller, we would appreciate it if you could circle either yes or no if you think it’s a good idea.

10. Woman is trying to get onto a train unaware that she is being followed.
Yes No

This was a very popular idea, getting the majority of the vote. We believe that this idea was popular because it is very mysterious, and would create a sense of danger and excitement for the audience.

11. Woman is being blackmailed and is slowly going mad in a hotel room.
Yes No

This was also a very popular idea, gaining the majority of the vote. This is the idea that we went with for our film, because we felt that it was the most original, and quite unusual for a thriller film. It is also very psychological, which we believe our audience will enjoy. It also creates mystery for the audience, and arises a lot of questions - such as, who is keeping her in the hotel room?


12. Man is lurking in bushes near children’s play area.
Yes No

This was a close vote, but the audience voted yes. However, we felt that this could be potentially be a controversial plot, as children would be used, and that it could possibly be difficult to film.

13. A girl is possessed by the spirit of an orphan who died where her house was built.
Yes No

This was quite a popular idea too, but we felt that the plot sounds quite similar, and may have possibly been done before.

14. Librarian sat in an abandoned library with blood pouring off her hands.
Yes No

There was a mixed-vote for this idea, as the audience wasn't very sure about it. We agreed with the audience, and felt that it may potentially be difficult to create a full film based on that idea.

15. Woman running through forest.
Yes No

This idea was not very popular with the audience, and we feel that they may not have liked it because of its predictability, and because it is quite similar to other films, so it could be difficult to make our film unique.

16. Rapist follows teenage girl around town centre.
Yes No

The audience liked this idea, as it creates a sense of danger and suspense for the audience. Also, with the main character being a teenage girl, we feel that the young target audience could relate more to the character.

17. Murderer is being sent to prison then “Victim” appears before trial.
Yes No

This idea was not very popular with the audience, and we feel that it may have been difficult to make a full film out of this idea.

18. Teenagers break into a haunted house.
Yes No

This idea got an equal vote, as the audience wasn't quite sure about it. However, we feel that the young target audience could have also related to the characters.

19. Mysterious patch of blood is found with no reason for it being there.
Yes No

This was a very unpopular idea, as we feel it may have been because it would have been difficult to come up with a plot that was relatable and understandable.

20. These are our ideas for film names we would appreciate it if you could circle either yes or no if you think it’s a good idea.

A. Platform 13
Yes No

Platform 13 was a popular choice for the name of our film, and we think this is because of the association with the number 13, and bad things, so it instantly gives the film a sense of danger and suspicion, just by the name.

B. Suite 16
Yes No

This was a very popular choice for the name, and is the name we ended up using for our film. Suite 16 is a good title because it uses the word 'suite', which hints to the audience before they've even seen the film, that it is set in a hotel. It also uses '16', which is the main characters age, and the expression 'Sweet 16' is a common phrase, which could be used to describe how Jenny used to be before she was confined to the hotel room.

C. Mr Wolf
Yes No

Mr Wolf was an unpopular choice of name for our film, and we feel it was because we have a teenage target audience, that it sounded a bit like a childrens film, or hinted more at immature audiences.

D. 13 Woodley Fold
Yes No

This was also an unpopular choice of name, and we feel it is because it not creative enough, and does not give away any hints of the plot of the film. It also does not make the audience feel threatened or endangered in any way.

E. Checkout Time
Yes No

This was also an unpopular title, and we feel it is again not imaginative enough, and doesn't really sound like the name of a thriller film.

F. No Escape
Yes No

This was a popular thriller name, and we feel it is because it makes the audience feel instantly threatened. 'No Escape' hints that there is no escape for the character, and it is going to be a really interesting plot. It also makes the audience ask questions - why can't the character escape?

G. Shopping Run
Yes No

This was the most unpopular title, and we feel it would not appeal to our target audience, and that it is not creative enough, nor does it relate to thriller films.

H. Jury Duty
Yes No


This was a close vote, but was eventually decided as a good idea for a plot name. We think it is because the title raises some suspicion, but could also hint to the plot.

I. Past Life
Yes No


This idea was voted neither a good or bad idea, and we feel it could possibly be giving away too much to the audience already, which is why they did not pick it. However, it hints at some sort of 'spirit' in the film, which could of excited the audience to make them pick it.

J. Don’t Look Back
Yes No

This was a popular idea, as we feel that it creates mystery and danger for the audience. It also hints at quite a creative, interesting plot.

Classification



I would classify our film at an 15. This would fit in with our target audience, but also with the classification guidelines of a 15.




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Section 5: Treatment

Treatment

Suite 16 will be an unusual thriller. One female will be confined to a hotel room, surrounded by images of her in unusual situations.



Synopsis

Jenny is confined to a hotel room, because she is being blackmailed. All around this dull room are pictures of Jenny lining the wall. There is one of her in an alley way walking to work, many of her in shops and one in a phone box panicking. Throughout the film she gets more crazed and weird, calling herself Jen-Jen, a comfort whilst she’s going through her own stressful train. Small noises build up in her mind to huge bangs and voices calling her name. There is a camera placed in her room, so she knows if she leaves, someone is always watching out for her. Jenny walks out of her room to wash her face and calm herself down, although when she comes back there are more pictures of her covering the walls.

Later on in the film Jenny develops the courage to leave the room she has been confined to for several months. This is evident to the audience as there is rubbish covering the floor and her appearance is becoming steadily more ‘scatty’. She decides she wants to try and catch the blackmailers John Doe and Joe Bloggs. These two men try and run around after her. There are many close encounters when they cross paths, near a downtown area and a police station, but Jenny just about manages to escape their capture.

Although Jenny is running away and being chased, we, as an audience, are never told what happens. The audience are left to put the pieces together, and find the hidden clues. Jenny eventually finds out herself that she is being blackmailed for a number of reasons; one of them being that she witnessed the murder of a 10 year old child several months ago. Another being her easygoing nature leading her to act as a target – she is easily manipulated and is vital for Joe and John’s plans.

The end of the film is a chase scene – we see Jenny checking into another hotel with the same distressed tone as we heard in the first few seconds of the film. This leaves the film open to discussion for the audience – no obvious ending means that she could be forever escaping on her quest to live.


Opening scene

Firstly, the screen is blank and all we can hear is diegetic sound from the room Jenny is in. She is panicking because she’s just found out that people are after her. She then quickly books a hotel room, but each room she goes to has got several pictures of her. Finally she chooses a room and sits down to calm her self. Jenny goes to wash her face then when she comes back there are more pictures of her around the room. She then picks an image off the wall and slides down and starts to cry. After this she decides to add cameras to the room so she can try and capture anyone that leaves and enters the room.


Target Audience

The film will have a target audience of 16-25 year olds. Most people at these ages enjoy watching psychological thrillers so having it this age will relate to our ages group more. Although the story is a serious one, 16-25 year old will be able to understand it more than a lower age group.

Therefore our certificate will be 15, to relate to the younger generation of today. Although it’s not everyday someone gets blackmailed the reasons why will link to teenage life.


Other details

The film won’t have any recognised people because this wont be possible which will make it more realistic. Our locations will be very strange as were choosing a hotel room to shoot our whole film in which is unusual for many thrillers.

Section 6: Character outlines and Script

Character Outlines

Jenny
Jenny is a scared character. The young girl, aged 18 is fragile and fearful. She is small and acts vulnerable, but underneath her terrified exterior is a strong yet psychotic woman.

Robert
Jenny’s dad. He is fed up of his daughter and her actions and continually calls her ‘crazy’. He has been around for her all her life, but after Jenny’s mother died, he turned to alcohol. Jenny still considers him a loving presence in her life. He is tall, dark and conventionally handsome, but at the same time an ageing 40 year old.

Sandra

The receptionist of the hotel. She is nosy and has been at the hotel with Sergei for 15 years. She remains young however, as a pretty blonde 35 year old and soon acts as a mother figure to Jenny. But it doesn’t last long, as she soon talks to Jenny’s dad.

Sergei

The housekeeper of the hotel. He knows everyone’s business- especially Jenny’s. He is looking out for her, but ultimately his help leads to failure. He is a very two-faced person. He is close to retirement age, with deep set wrinkles and white hair.

John Doe
The chief blackmailer against Jenny. He is about 60, Skinny and short, He never shows his face on screen, but remains a hidden presence in Jenny’s life throughout the film. He is a very strong character, but his need for Jenny’s information transforms him to a weak person.

Joe Bloggs

Doe’s sidekick. He is far from the brains of the operation, and uses his muscles to any advantage he can. His solution to most problems is violence. A young 25 year old, a tall, muscular man, his face is hidden with a ski mask.


SCRIPT

FADE IN:
EXT. OUTSIDE HOTEL – DAY

Establishing shot outside of the hotel.



CUT TO:
INT. OUTSIDE HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Character #1 scrambles for keys.



CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Inside the hotel room.

Character searches room.

Character sits on chair and curls up in a ball.

Character gets up and we get shots of pictures which are lining the wall.

Character takes one picture off the wall and falls against it.



CAPTION SHOWS 2 WEEKS LATER



CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY, 2 WEEKS LATER

Character is on a chair which she was sat on two weeks previously, but wearing different clothes and sat in a different position to symbolise the time lapse.

The character is fidgeting and then the phone which is in the character’s hands begins to ring. She answers the phone and stands up to walk


JENNY (while on the phone)
Hello?



CUT TO:
INT. BATHROOM – DAY

Within the en suite bathroom of the hotel room.

Character is still on the phone

JENNY (while on the phone)
I know, dad.

JENNY (while on the phone)
I’ve got to go. I love you.

Jenny puts the phone down and falls against the bathroom door, crying.



CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Shadow on the bathroom door.



CUT TO:
INT. BATHROOM – DAY

*BANG FROM OUTSIDE THE DOOR*

Jenny gasps and runs outside of the bathroom

CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Jenny runs into the bedroom and pauses by the bed. We are then able to see a bed covered in pills and pictures. She picks up a piece of paper from the bed and drops a picture off it.

Jenny then drops the letter and runs towards the window.



CUT TO:
EXT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Outside Jenny’s bedroom window, Jenny searches out of the window and looks in every direction. She then looks straight into the camera.

Captions are laid over the film;

CAPTION: Produced by Vick Copley

CAPTION: Edited by Demi Mottram

CAPTION: Written by Rebecca Marshall



FADE TO BLACK



CAPTION: Directed by Leanne Smith



BLACK AND RED CAPTION STATING ‘SUITE 16’



FADE OUT


Section 7: Production Material - Storyboards & Shotlists