Wednesday, 4 November 2009

Section 6: Character outlines and Script

Character Outlines

Jenny
Jenny is a scared character. The young girl, aged 18 is fragile and fearful. She is small and acts vulnerable, but underneath her terrified exterior is a strong yet psychotic woman.

Robert
Jenny’s dad. He is fed up of his daughter and her actions and continually calls her ‘crazy’. He has been around for her all her life, but after Jenny’s mother died, he turned to alcohol. Jenny still considers him a loving presence in her life. He is tall, dark and conventionally handsome, but at the same time an ageing 40 year old.

Sandra

The receptionist of the hotel. She is nosy and has been at the hotel with Sergei for 15 years. She remains young however, as a pretty blonde 35 year old and soon acts as a mother figure to Jenny. But it doesn’t last long, as she soon talks to Jenny’s dad.

Sergei

The housekeeper of the hotel. He knows everyone’s business- especially Jenny’s. He is looking out for her, but ultimately his help leads to failure. He is a very two-faced person. He is close to retirement age, with deep set wrinkles and white hair.

John Doe
The chief blackmailer against Jenny. He is about 60, Skinny and short, He never shows his face on screen, but remains a hidden presence in Jenny’s life throughout the film. He is a very strong character, but his need for Jenny’s information transforms him to a weak person.

Joe Bloggs

Doe’s sidekick. He is far from the brains of the operation, and uses his muscles to any advantage he can. His solution to most problems is violence. A young 25 year old, a tall, muscular man, his face is hidden with a ski mask.


SCRIPT

FADE IN:
EXT. OUTSIDE HOTEL – DAY

Establishing shot outside of the hotel.



CUT TO:
INT. OUTSIDE HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Character #1 scrambles for keys.



CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Inside the hotel room.

Character searches room.

Character sits on chair and curls up in a ball.

Character gets up and we get shots of pictures which are lining the wall.

Character takes one picture off the wall and falls against it.



CAPTION SHOWS 2 WEEKS LATER



CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY, 2 WEEKS LATER

Character is on a chair which she was sat on two weeks previously, but wearing different clothes and sat in a different position to symbolise the time lapse.

The character is fidgeting and then the phone which is in the character’s hands begins to ring. She answers the phone and stands up to walk


JENNY (while on the phone)
Hello?



CUT TO:
INT. BATHROOM – DAY

Within the en suite bathroom of the hotel room.

Character is still on the phone

JENNY (while on the phone)
I know, dad.

JENNY (while on the phone)
I’ve got to go. I love you.

Jenny puts the phone down and falls against the bathroom door, crying.



CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Shadow on the bathroom door.



CUT TO:
INT. BATHROOM – DAY

*BANG FROM OUTSIDE THE DOOR*

Jenny gasps and runs outside of the bathroom

CUT TO:
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Jenny runs into the bedroom and pauses by the bed. We are then able to see a bed covered in pills and pictures. She picks up a piece of paper from the bed and drops a picture off it.

Jenny then drops the letter and runs towards the window.



CUT TO:
EXT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY

Outside Jenny’s bedroom window, Jenny searches out of the window and looks in every direction. She then looks straight into the camera.

Captions are laid over the film;

CAPTION: Produced by Vick Copley

CAPTION: Edited by Demi Mottram

CAPTION: Written by Rebecca Marshall



FADE TO BLACK



CAPTION: Directed by Leanne Smith



BLACK AND RED CAPTION STATING ‘SUITE 16’



FADE OUT


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